Bloodworth
I have had a few responses from readers who read Provinces of Night based on my recommendation. Some shared my view
that the book was terrific; others not so much. Everyone agreed that William
Gay is a wordsmith. Thanks to all who took the time.
I received All the Pretty Horses
as a gift many years ago. When I started reading Cormac McCarthy’s novel, I was
put off by the long sentences and the sparse punctuation. But I stuck with it
and am glad that I did. McCarthy is one of Gay’s favorite authors and he
includes a quote from his writing in at least one of his books. I started my
most recent novel trying to leave out the apostrophes on slang dialogue, (as
well as quotation marks) but found out I am neither McCarthy nor Gay. I gave it
up because I think my readers would be put off.
The responses I received from Provinces
readers led to today’s review of the movie based on Gay’s book. Here is a
portion of the letter I wrote William Gay, the author, after seeing Bloodworth.
I traveled to Tennessee in 2009 and you were gracious enough to sit
down and chat with me for most of an afternoon.
As I told you then, Provinces of
Night is my favorite novel of all time.
I thoroughly enjoyed watching Hal Holbrook in That Evening Sun after reading your story collection, so I eagerly
anticipated watching Bloodworth and
was pleased to see Kris Kristofferson featured on the cover of Cowboys and Indians magazine. I finally
got to see it this weekend and thought you might be interested on a viewer’s
take on the movie.
I enjoyed the movie and think Kris did a credible job with E. F.,
although I think you created a character a lot stronger than he played him. He
sort of needed that conversation with the truck driver to establish himself as
a man who was intelligent and crafty and who could be violent. The young actor
did okay with Fleming, but I saw your novel character as not quite so angry.
I know why they had to leave out Albright, but I really hated not
seeing him. That pig scene was one of the funniest I have ever read, though I
see why they could not reenact it. I also hated that they left out Warren’s
son.
Val Kilmer was close to perfect as Doc Holliday in Tombstone, but he bombs as Warren. Warren was, I thought, all wrong
both in costume and mannerisms. Your book portrayed Warren, Medal of Honor
winner that he was, as much stronger, less of a drunken fool. He was a
hard-drinking, hard-living man who also
had a soft streak for his brother’s son, and his own son, of course (that was
my take, at least). I would have dressed him in the costume of the day for a
handsome man who made a lot of money and did not mind throwing it around, just
couldn’t settle down, but far from the vain fool Kilmer portrayed. I guess they had a hard time with him because
the time period in the book is different than the movie.
I usually like Kilmer and Yoakum, but I also thought Dwight Yoakum got
Boyd wrong. I saw Boyd as one of the most sympathetic characters in your book.
He was an absent father and far from perfect man who lived by a black and white
code. “Take my wife, I take your life.” His son’s literary pursuits may have
made him uncomfortable, but he usually brought Fleming a book or two to read
when he returned from one of his gallivants. This showed his pride and love for
the boy and that really rounded him as a complex character. Also, Boyd and
Fleming worked hard side by side and Boyd usually brought home food when he
returned. And the book’s killing was much more credible than the one in the
movie.
The guy who played Brady did a credible job. I certainly like Barry
Corbin and enjoyed seeing him in That
Evening Sun too, but I was disappointed not to see Itchy-Mama and those
great old men on the porch. They had some of the best lines in the book.
I know it must have been difficult for the screenwriter to try to
capture the rich characters you created. Congratulations on having the book
made into a movie. I may not be able to write best-sellers, but I know a great
author when I see one. I have said “I told you so” to lots of folks when the
movies came out.
And what did Gay say to all this? Nothing. Remember? He’s
reclusive.
I maintain that Gay can make words sing with both humor and
raw emotion. Here’s an example of what was left out of the movie. Albright, a
young ne’er-do-well who has a propensity for getting himself into awful
predicaments, has to take a hog as payment for painting a barn. His only means
of transportation is a car he has painted as a taxicab. He has to transport the
hog in the back seat. He looked back and
the hog was studying him with something akin to speculation. Halfway across the
railroad trestle over the river the hog seemed taken with some sort of fit. It . . .
made a razorous slash in the upholstery and dragged out a mouthful of stuffing.
. . . He turned in the seat and began to beat the hog about the head and
shoulders with his fists. Quit it, he yelled.
The hog manages to escape, of course, and Albright goes
after him, leaving his car on the one-lane trestle. A farmer in overalls stops
behind the car and looks over the bridge as Albright wrestles with the hog on the
river bank. You was to move your car I’d
get on out of your way and you could go on about your business. The
interruptions breaks Albright’s concentration and the hog uses the moment to
escape. The farmer continues. If that’s
your hog, and I got no reason to suspect it ain’t, then you can do whatever you
want to. But you’re holdin up traffic here. . . . I never knowed anybody to
hogfarm out of a taxicab anyway.
This book has humor, but it is dark, too. Consider this
scene with E. W. Bloodworth, the character played by Kristofferson. Bloodworth’s wife Julia has sent word to her
father (Bradshaw) to come for her. Bloodworth vows to kill him before he will
allow him to take her away. He’s here because I sent for him, Julia
said. I don’t know why anybody would send for a dead man, he told her. I’ll stretch
out Bradshaws till they hold each other up like trees felled in a thick woods. . . . They ain’t quit makin shells. They ain’t
quit makin caskets. I’ll stretch out Bradshaws from the biggest to the least,
till they have to import caskets out of other states, till they run dry on that
and bury them without caskets, till they finally throw up their hands and let
em lay where they fall.
He held her finally
back to his chest and the soapy smell of her hair in his face and clamped in
arms that would not constrain her urgency. If you do that, you’ll have to kill
me, too, she finally said. Did I ever hurt you? he asked. You hurt me ever breath
I take, she told him. He laid the pistol aside and watched the door close
behind her and watched her climb aboard the wagon and watched the old man speak
not to her but to the mules, popping the lines and turning the wagon into the
dusty roadbed, watched the wagon diminish into the white dust until there was
nothing to see but dust settling, and watching even that.
One more excerpt about Bloodworth’s banjo playing. He had a tale to tell. He made you believe
it was your tale as well. Police came to tell him to move it along and stayed
to listen. Sometimes they even dropped their own half dollars into the hat.
Bloodworth sang songs he’d heard and songs he’d made up and songs he’d stolen
from other singers. He sang about death and empty beds and songs that sounded
like invitations until you thought about them for a while and then they began
to sound like threats. Violence ran through them like heat lightning, winter
winds whistled them along like paper cups turning hollowly down frozen streets.
Why would you leave those scenes out of a movie?